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All Deviations

The Candle That Never Went Out by ~tfedorchik:icontfedorchik:



She looked at me with those deep brown eyes
My heartfelt attraction was true love’s disguise
I ran my hands up and down her hips
As she kissed me with those beautiful lips
Hands ran here, hands ran there
Our hearts were split open everywhere
She said she was sorry, I asked her what for
Then she pulled my face onto hers once more
Then finally pushed me back and away
I realized then that my little ray
Of sunshine was about to give me a burn
She said it was time, you think I’d learn
But our little romance was no more after that day
And my mind was driven into a tormenting fray
Of thoughts and feelings of being dead
And with all of this being said
It goes without saying I became quite the crier
Things led to things, now I’m quite the liar
To myself, that is, or maybe I’m confused
Because quite frankly it’s felt like I was used
And now that I’m older I still regret
Not being good enough, or better yet
Not being worthy or compatible enough for her
To call me her only one, that’s for sure
If I’ll move on I can never say
I guess I’ll be done once the pain’s gone away
Maybe I’ll find someone else, I don’t know who
But until that day I’ll always love you
©2008 ~tfedorchik
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So this started out as something and morphed into quite something else. Oh well, I'm satisfied. :)
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~thephantom357:iconthephantom357: May 13, 2008, 3:13:24 PM
really really good! i love it :) great job
~tfedorchik:icontfedorchik: May 13, 2008, 4:42:10 PM
Glad you like it :) and thanks